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BS, I notice your topic header describes you "remakable Banshee Screams", when are you going to reveal you new "make-over"?

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These are more thoughts and writings.

 

The passing of existence.

The realization

a mindset has vanished.

 

An ironic moment.

When the insecurities of consciousness are exposed

and our dreams enter the realms of reality.

 

My ego revived itself

in an instance, during a competitive thought.

I analyzed the strategy of my enemies in desperation

and it was then where I had become

somebody else for survival.

 

Within those days of battling thoughts

a determination outside of myself manifested.

I could see who I was and it was then

where I found contentment.

 

A born leader. An influence.

His suffering has given him the sacred

gift of understanding.

A voice of knowledge and a savior

to those who stand alone.

One who cannot be affected

by the cruelty human beings unleash.

One who demonstrates a lawless

act of which saves those in doubt.

One who stands unbroken to those

who challenge the greatness of his ability.

One who cannot be fazed by those

who burn in his light.

 

A real life occurrence will project inside your brain.

It will have meaning that will transform itself as

you grow to understand the circumstances

which have prevailed.

 

The prime moment.

Hands raised with intensity.

Emotion building in our bodies.

Raw energy which surrounds us.

Words which fulfill us.

The performer in ourselves.

 

Thank you BS for sharing that with us. It operates on many levels and has certainly evoked a visceral reaction within me. I wonder, given that you dedicated a small rhyme to Godot, whether there is any chance of a poem dedicated to me at some time. Or do you not do requests?

 

Ignore your detractors and keep writing my son - we are glimpsing your very soul!

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I wonder, given that you dedicated a small rhyme to Godot, whether there is any chance of a poem dedicated to me at some time. Or do you not do requests?

 

While Banshees is composing something, I'll have a go.

 

There was a DLer named Pooka,

Who was a regular fan of the snooker.

He saw Jimmy White,

And said "Your hair's shite".

So he shot poor Jim with a bazooka

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These are more thoughts and writings.

 

The passing of existence.

The realization

a mindset has vanished.

 

An ironic moment.

When the insecurities of consciousness are exposed

and our dreams enter the realms of reality.

 

My ego revived itself

in an instance, during a competitive thought.

I analyzed the strategy of my enemies in desperation

and it was then where I had become

somebody else for survival.

 

Within those days of battling thoughts

a determination outside of myself manifested.

I could see who I was and it was then

where I found contentment.

 

A born leader. An influence.

His suffering has given him the sacred

gift of understanding.

A voice of knowledge and a savior

to those who stand alone.

One who cannot be affected

by the cruelty human beings unleash.

One who demonstrates a lawless

act of which saves those in doubt.

One who stands unbroken to those

who challenge the greatness of his ability.

One who cannot be fazed by those

who burn in his light.

 

A real life occurrence will project inside your brain.

It will have meaning that will transform itself as

you grow to understand the circumstances

which have prevailed.

 

The prime moment.

Hands raised with intensity.

Emotion building in our bodies.

Raw energy which surrounds us.

Words which fulfill us.

The performer in ourselves.

 

Thank you BS for sharing that with us. It operates on many levels and has certainly evoked a visceral reaction within me. I wonder, given that you dedicated a small rhyme to Godot, whether there is any chance of a poem dedicated to me at some time. Or do you not do requests?

 

Ignore your detractors and keep writing my son - we are glimpsing your very soul!

Is this soul, by any chance, prefixed with the letter R?

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These are more thoughts and writings.

 

 

The performer in ourselves.

 

Thank you BS for sharing that with us. It operates on many levels and has certainly evoked a visceral reaction within me. I wonder, given that you dedicated a small rhyme to Godot, whether there is any chance of a poem dedicated to me at some time. Or do you not do requests?

 

Ignore your detractors and keep writing my son - we are glimpsing your very soul!

Is this soul, by any chance, prefixed with the letter R?

LFN........ really! I am disappointed with your cynicism. Though many, I am sure, hanker after a snatch of the BS R-soul.

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I'm going to live to regret this, but I kind of wish Mr Scream/The Authority would make a (slight) return. Even with a poem. Possibly.

 

Absence makes ... and all that.

 

Give me your address. I want to give you a slap.

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I kind of agree with Harry. There is nobody (with the possible exception of BCAlum) that we can really take the piss out of on here anymore. Sure, we get the odd idiot that turns up for a day or two then naffs off again, but nobody with the real class of twattery shown by BS.

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I kind of agree with Harry. There is nobody (with the possible exception of BCAlum) that we can really take the piss out of on here anymore. Sure, we get the odd idiot that turns up for a day or two then naffs off again, but nobody with the real class of twattery shown by BS.

 

Lardy, that's defeatist talk.

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I kind of agree with Harry. There is nobody (with the possible exception of BCAlum) that we can really take the piss out of on here anymore. Sure, we get the odd idiot that turns up for a day or two then naffs off again, but nobody with the real class of twattery shown by BS.

 

What about ghostofchat whatever? I was going to suggest Bob Loblah too, but it seems like he's been nuked off the face of the forum...

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I kind of agree with Harry. There is nobody (with the possible exception of BCAlum) that we can really take the piss out of on here anymore. Sure, we get the odd idiot that turns up for a day or two then naffs off again, but nobody with the real class of twattery shown by BS.

 

What about ghostofchat whatever? I was going to suggest Bob Loblah too, but it seems like he's been nuked off the face of the forum...

 

True, ghostofchat

Is a bit of a twat

But Bob Loblah

Rhymes with Bruce Grobbelaar.

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I have to say that I miss the old twat.

Fings really aint wot they used to be.

PS: Whatever happened to The Pooka?

He was a class act.

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I have to say that I miss the old twat.

Fings really aint wot they used to be.

PS: Whatever happened to The Pooka?

He was a class act.

 

isnt thje pooka dead? or was that someone else?

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History.

 

Banshee's Scream, like Jackson, seemed to be almost like an object at the end. :unsure:

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History.

 

Banshee's Scream, like Jackson, seemed to be almost like an object at the end. :unsure:

Oh goody, I love cryptic crosswords! How many letters?

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History.

 

Banshee's Scream, like Jackson, seemed to be almost like an object at the end. :unsure:

Oh goody, I love cryptic crosswords! How many letters?

Banshee's Scream, like Jackson, seemed to be almost like an object at the end. 4,3

F_ _ _ W_ _

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History.

 

Banshee's Scream, like Jackson, seemed to be almost like an object at the end. :unsure:

Oh goody, I love cryptic crosswords! How many letters?

Banshee's Scream, like Jackson, seemed to be almost like an object at the end. 4,3

F_ _ _ W_ _

 

5,6

 

D_ _ _ _ T _ _ _ _ _

 

5,3

 

P _ _ _ _ B _ _

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Anybody know whether our loveable cretin has been back under an alias?

I cant believe he hasnt had a peek of late, even Mental Hospitals have the WWW!

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Anybody know whether our loveable cretin has been back under an alias?

I cant believe he hasnt had a peek of late, even Mental Hospitals have the WWW!

I'll give you one guess. And no isn't an option.

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Anybody know whether our loveable cretin has been back under an alias?

I cant believe he hasnt had a peek of late, even Mental Hospitals have the WWW!

I'll give you one guess. And no isn't an option.

Honez, I appreciate that really hurt you to say that. :unsure:

Has to be said tho, there have been posts on here that have made Mr Scream look almost as intelligent as he thinks he is.

Ive got a few bouts lined up for him on here, best he hurries back.

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Anybody know whether our loveable cretin has been back under an alias?

I cant believe he hasnt had a peek of late, even Mental Hospitals have the WWW!

I'll give you one guess. And no isn't an option.

Honez, I appreciate that really hurt you to say that. :unsure:

Has to be said tho, there have been posts on here that have made Mr Scream look almost as intelligent as he thinks he is.

Ive got a few bouts lined up for him on here, best he hurries back.

Some of those make me nostalgic for Iain, let alone Banshees.

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2 hours ago, harrymcnallysblueandwhitearmy said:

Did the remakable BS ever return?

 

He last posted on New Year in 2017.

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